I've spent a good minute staring at the first panel. For the tattoos. And then at the fourth. For the water this time.
Is it just me, or your lines are becoming a little softer? Not that it's a bad thing, mind you. It's just that I was skimming through the older pages and noticed a difference.
In any case, I hope that Knight won't take too much damage. It's not very reassuring when someone tells you: "You'll be damaged!".

24th Dec 2016, 8:24 PM edit delete reply

Thanks Artemisia!

Really glad you're enjoying the visuals. This page was a lot of fun to do.
And I'm glad too, that you're noticing changes in the style. I've been trying different brushes, different techniques, I still don't know what I'm comfortable with. I do tend to change a lot page-to-page, and I'll probably be more consistent in future. I like to use heavier lines when it's dark, as well, thick sections, very inky brushes, but when it's brightly lit, I tend to make the lines a lot thinner and lighter.
Again, I'll stress I don't know what I'm doing. It's only the last few pages I've been playing with lighting at all.

And I hope the knight isn't too badly damaged as well. I kinda need him, or else the story is gonna be very anticlimactic.

24th Dec 2016, 8:39 PM edit delete reply

A Queer Person

24th Dec 2016, 8:41 PM edit delete reply

The Real Kyle
I cannot tell you how much we appreciate this comment.

24th Dec 2016, 9:12 PM edit delete reply

The Coolest
This is probably my favorite page so far. Panels #1 and #4 are particular good

24th Dec 2016, 10:22 PM edit delete reply

Thanks Pip! Glad you're keeping up with this, and that you give your feedback :D always good to hear from you

24th Dec 2016, 10:42 PM edit delete reply

Owed Fanart
That 4th panel is mind-blowingly awesome in every sense of the word! ;D

25th Dec 2016, 4:41 AM edit delete reply

Thanks Caesar, I had always envisioned that panel being dramatic, and I'm glad the water turned out OK. Well, I think it did. These guys in the comments seem to know it's water, so I think I made that clear at least...

25th Dec 2016, 12:54 PM edit delete reply

Cop on Luke and do something useful - or talented!

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25th Dec 2016, 4:19 PM edit delete reply

The Real Kyle
A very merry seasonal meh to you too sir.

25th Dec 2016, 5:20 PM edit delete reply

Main Squeeze
Boob Physicist
Finally WiFi. Jeez. I missed so much stuff. This is a really great page. I love the colours, they turned out great. Also the Psion speaking - or rather thinking - was really good. Also the panels, the way they are arranged is really nice, I liked that.
Also, Luke: Shut up. :'D
Looking forward to your next page, it's gonna get really interesting now.

25th Dec 2016, 5:25 PM edit delete reply

Thank you so much for your kind words, they're appreciated as always. I'm glad you liked this page, it's one of my favourites.
I'm gonna try improve the psion thought bubbles as time goes on, but I love the little guys. They're just so cocky.
And don't get me started on the hassles of color reproduction with my monitor! I'm gonna have to start using different hardware soon, because having to verify colors against a phone screen is a pain.
Thanks for the kind comment as usual :3

25th Dec 2016, 5:32 PM edit delete reply

Hardcore Arkian
I mostly focused on the white tubes visibly piercing his body... Ouch.
The knight actually seems in a lot of pain and not so willing... Knowing you will be damaged is VERY reassuring.
Then again, it is nothing new for him.

So... No solid guess from that other than maybe they are adjusting him to the Earth atmosphere OR changing his body into something human like for that OR for wherever he is going...

25th Dec 2016, 7:52 PM edit delete reply

The Real Kyle
Pain is definitely not uncommon for the Knight especially physical, Dont want to give too much away but you're on the right track and alot more will be revealed soon :)

26th Dec 2016, 3:08 AM edit delete reply

Sorry I didn't reply sooner, MadJak, I was on holidays. The knight isn't gonna enjoy the next few pages. Glad you're keeping up with the updates, and I'm sure you'll enjoy what's gonna happen next!

2nd Jan 2017, 10:04 AM edit delete reply